I was thinking in the ROTS HV during the scene where Obi-Wan goes to visit Padme instead of Obi-Wan (Ob-Ewan) finding out where Anakin is ( he already knew because Jandor Tarvin left him a note) Ob-Ewan and Patme kiss passionately and discuss the fact that Manakin is going to Mustafarfaraway and he and Jandor Tarvin are going out to get him and Patme pleads with him to not kill Manakin. Anyone can do whatever else they want with that scene, just don't make it dirty. The affair is mostly implied not seen.
Other ideas would be for ROTJ HV. Any one can watch the carebares movie and listen to the bad guy song at the end of the movie and see the parallels between the evil spirit/carebears movie badguy and palps/Vacuous (Name for Vader).
I or someone, maybe we can work together to flesh out the whole carebears/ewoks connection, which is where I feel the ROTJ HV fell off. Someone can start a ROTJ HV -CONCLUSION (SPOILERS) to finish it up. And I feel the ID4 speech (Independence from George Lucas Day) speech needs to be rewritten and tweaked to match the current situation. (It's ok for anyone to rewrite it, because I wrote that speech .
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Five years ago around this time in January I abandoned Star Wars thinking it did not fit in with my religious beliefs, but I was wrong about that.
Now I'm re-upping this HV planning thread, hoping that I and some other can use it to collaborate on new HV stories as well as finishing the old ones.
So I is unfinished unless someone can procure a copy of the original and they are welcome to repost it, or if more than one peron has a copy, take turns reposting it. The bigger fish scene i feel should be restored to the original while i believe the LOTR reference should be kept along with the philosophy/theology reference that Ob-Ewan uses in Boss Nasty's throneroom.
The movie and movie script-based Humorous Versions:
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Completed HV's:
I (Technically, though it still is incomplete unless there is SOMEONE out there with a copy of the original.)
II
IV
V
Deliverance
Incomplete HV's
III
VI
VII
VIII
The Clone Wars
The Mandalorian
Not started yet:
IX
Extracurricular:
ROUGE ONE
HANDS OFF PART ONE
The Goofy Bunch-Not started
Rebelliousness- Not started
The Holiday Special is too sacred to touch-hands off
I cant do all this alone. -BLSK"study3600"V
Let's do this thing. I'll post a link to ROTJ, RoTS and TFA HV's soon. But III MUST be finished before VI is completed. That is a must. Now is the time for all good men and women in the JCC and Mara/luke4ever boards to come to the aid of the Humorous Versions.
God bless.-Brent Ciou.]
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Help for writing in script format:
boards.theforce.net/threads/help-for-budding-screenplay-writers.50056314/If you have any ideas for what we can do to continue to write and finish the main 9 episodes, please feel free to post them here, as here is the only place we are allowed to discuss and trade ideas for the threads, not allowed on the commentary on the threads themselves. -Ciou.
So the order that the Star Wars Based Humorous Versions must be done in is first III must be completed, then VI, then VII, VIII, IX and beyond.
Meanwhile we must work on I (but I'd prefer a reposting of the original by someone who has access to it) and The Clown Wars, also linked above, or will be.
This thread is for discussing ideas of all those, spoiler free, as well as of RoadRiff, HV, also linked here, or will be, and any other HV anyone woluld like to start. just use your imagination. the sky's the limit.
For The Mortis Arc:
Much has to be kept exactly the same essentially because of the sacredness of it, still the Father Son and Daughter and Ahsoka Bratto still has to absorb what she absorbs. The humor comes more from irony and humorous situations created from sarcasm and sight gags, and no one can use any bad language on their planet.
For the Water War: In both 2003 and S 4X1 of the regular clone wars series, there has to be internal consistency as there is in the series. In the Prequel HV's Kit Fitso is called Kid Fatso, and he also must be in the Clown wars.
The Clone Circus:
Remember that the Prime Minister is the Ringmaster Minister, as per AOTC HV compilation.
No Bad Batch Spoilers until 5 months after the original airdate of the episode with the spoiler. If you are just dying to include one or some, edit it or them in later. No Mandolorian spoilers until at least July of this year (2021) since it is so sensitive. In July we can start the MacGuffin, the parody Mandolorian Script.
The Clone Circus:
The clowns love to dance. They never strip and they are not slash. However they are all in a relationship individually with Patme, but it must be subtle enough not to be over the top, more implied than shown.
Obi/Ani/Patme love triangle
Manakin Streetwalker can go out of the room after he celebrates his ceremony after the end of the fight with Floorvent with his wife, then Ob-Ewan can come in and he can say something like now let the real celebration begin. Patme can say oh your an animal and it cuts to the next scene.
When 3PO reveals his gold plating, a bunch of female droids around him ogle and whistle and catcall, including a familiar female droid from Solo, Dot Matrix from Spaceballs, and Rosie from the Jetsons.
III
In ROTS HV, Ob-Ewan can come into Patme and Manakin's apartment and since he already knows where he is, they can just have the begining of a makeout session and discuss a fall to the dark side, then Patme can willingly take him to Mustafarfaraway.
I have a very good idea for the Marcus gets hit by thousands of walker lasers and survives scene in Episode 8 HV so no one do that. If anyone else wants to stake a scene out, here is the place to do it.
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