Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Mar 27, 2021 21:14:19 GMT -6
Note: this script is NOT an add on.. it is the sole intellectual property of Brent Sohlden and may not be stolen and only I may write it.. if one Cardinal West wishes to co-write this script, he may and ONLY he may both comment and/or jump in with a written portion of the script at any time which I can comment on and get him to change or alter if need be and be open to the same for my writing from him and only from him and only for Episodes 10-12. If this be the case I will add his name, Cardinal West, to the byline. Otherwise, I will keep it 'Screenplay by Brent Lee Sohlden Koivopolo V' and give credit to Cardinal West at the end of said scripts for the idea of the Second Coruscant Accords and some if not all of the words of Thrawn's coup speech in Episode 10. I will also give credit to Timothy Zahn for Thrawn, C'boath, Luuke, the Nog'hri and the end of Episode 12, the way Thrawn dies. I will make this into a movie. this script will become the sole property of Disney and Kathleen Kennedy (but only Jon Favreau and Dave Filoni and I (and George Lucas if he wants it) are permitted to have creative control) in the future.. all rights reserved.. I lay all claim to it as my creation. You the reader are privileged to get a preview of the script of a Star Wars movie or movies that will be made years down the line. Do not comment on this thread until the last part of the script is posted. You the reader are not authorized to suggest ideas for said script or to add anything to it whatsoever. This is read only for your pleasure, entertainment, and enjoyment. God bless- Brent
Note end of episode 9 will be rewritten so #BenSoloLives
PS if you wish to comment on or discuss this script or you are George Lucas and wish to suggest ideas (no one else can) or if you wish to critique or comment, there is or will be an Episode 10 discussion thread in Star Wars talk, or you may start threads to discuss it and all things Star Wars.-BLSKV
Synopsis of trilogy:
Raw Elements:
Ysilimari
J'orus C'baoth
Grand Admiral Thrawn
Luuke (Pronounced Loo-OOk) an evil clone made from Luke's hand and C'boath's Apprentice
Rey or Lady Palpatine
The Ordu Aspectu Fortress returning from hyperspace after thousands of years who introduce themselves to Jedi Masters Rey and Ben and the Jedi Order as an ancient unorthodox Jedi sect.
Yavin 4
A map room on that planet in the Massassi Temple. The Aspectu clones come there at the beginning of 10 to find the Citadel on the Planet Bupa where there is also an ancient Jedi Temple on the Planet's other side, in a different climate, as an aside which will likely not figure into this Trilogy but in a Live Action Network Televisision Series I am now scripting and storyboarding in my Diary which will star Hayden Christensen as Anakin Skywalker and Ian McDiarmid, Ewan MacGregor and a whole host of others as well as someone who can play Ahsoka well and another actress who can play Asajj Ventress well and a Deep Faked Christopher Lee enhanced with CAVE-I CGI--as an aside to an aside, what a shock, a Star Wars planet that actually has more than ONE WORLDWIDE CLIMATE. Oy yeld eyeroll--Anyway, at the Aspectu Citadel they plan to harvest the DNA of Padawans because where they went and have returned from after thousands of years, they ran out of Midichlorians to perpetuate both the Force Sensitivity and basic existence of their cloned species/Jedi sect with, and rather than sacrifice their own Aspectu, they come back to this galaxy to harvest. For the act of harvesting Midichlorians kills any Jedi who is harvested and you cant harvest Midichlorians from a dead corpse (A KJV mistranslation better in the Inspired Version. I aint ever heard of a corpse that wasn't dead, have you?), which, (the fact that harvesting mc's kills ya and the aspectu need more, that is explained, I mean) is all explained in the scripts 10-12.
Rey searching Jedi archives on Chandrilla for records about the Ordu Aspectu only to be shocked by scholar who was seemingly on the Imperial side before her death eight years ago, Korin Aphra who says they sacrifice Padawans to try to achieve immortality by harvesting their midichlorians. Armed with this knowledge she and Ben and Grogu return from Chandrilla to where a group of Padawans, about to be taken by shuttles to the Citadel on Bupa and sacrificed, has gone ostensibly to learn about ancient Jedi lore from the Aspectu at their fortress. Walking in surruptitiosly as if she is just there merely to witness their education, she ignites her saber, contends with the Aspectu clones, Ben, Grogu Rey and three other Jedi vanquish them after a long struggle, and the children are rescued, but there is still Thrawn, C'boath, Luuke and the Noghri, whom we meet in Episode 11 on their homeworld of Honoghr, and remnants of the First Order to contend with in Episode 12. Luuke is a mighty cunning warrior and foe with a dark agenda of his own and is vanquished quite satisfyingly in Episode 12 as Thrawn's Galactic domination campaign draws to a close. Contrast that to 'The Last Command' where Luuke was just a mindless zombie who said little if anything and could use a lightsaber well. The children are rescued at the conclusion of 10: The Ordu Menace. In 12: Rise of the Jedi, Ezra Bridger has a lot of screentime. (Need to watch Ahsoka series first. Please, God, don't let Thrawn die in the Ahsoka series, in Christ's Mighty name I pray, Amen.) I may have to wait for more of the Kennedy/Filoni/Favraeuverse to be released and watch it in fan reactions on YouTube or research it on the internet or by reading books before I know how to handle Ezra properly, but Thrawn's name drop in The Mandolorian Season 2: Episode 5: The Jedi demands that both Rosaria Dawson and whoever they chose to play Bridger (and possibly Sabine Wren) must have a lot of screentime in Episode 12, and possibly I can add some vital scene into 11: Thrawn Strikes! later long after I or Cardinal West and I have completed it. I do not believe it would be wise to stick them in Episode 10, however, as the first Episode in a trilogy usually is meant to set up the story mainly while the second two movies elucidate the story more. To show too much too soon would be a blunder on my part. Like in Episode 13 I only referenced the Geonosians and a Death Star Fleet twice, but didn't show the Hope Stars until Episode 14, and saved the best fireworks and pyrotechnics for the conclusion of Act 2 of Episode 15 (boy it will give the modelmaker dept a big headache but they'll get over it and look back with pride at their time spent making Star Wars Episode 15:The Destruction of the Sith a living cinematic reality) and which is also why not a single Palpatine clone died in Episode 13, but I saved all the #Palpdeathkillcounts for Episodes 14-15. At any rate I do want to finish Episodes 10-11 by December 31, 2021 AD, with or without Ezra Bridger, Hera and Sabine's scenes (possibly more of Zeb's too). So here goes.
So as of now (the same time I wrote the last two paragraphs in this post) I have written the first 11 scenes already, or at least started Scene 11 before I got a huge case of writer's block and put it off for more or less seven days, but now I'm back at it with renewed fervor and inspiration. Still don't know how I will continue Scene 11. I'll pray about that and put in some more character dialogue before moving on to the Reylo wedding scene. Boy, I hope one of my actors doesn't say to me essentially but not exactly what Harrison Ford once said to George Lucas during the making of Star Wars: "George, you can write this stuff but you can't say it." He may have had a point cos he a wise boy that Harrison. It was Fisher that had the drug problem. But she had a good heart, that woman. But I'm rambling again....
For On Coruscant, Thrawn just doesnt attempt a coup, he performs the coup right at the middle of Episode 10 and with C'boath, whom he is protected from by the 'mari, abolishes the Second Coruscant Accords mid-film after the preliminaries, just as Rey and Ben are wisin' up to the Aspectu's game and Luuke is sent to assassinate them, and seizes control of the Outer rim and Mid Rim, pincing the worlds between those vital sectors in a vice grip with a superweapon called the Hammer with
Coruscant as the prize.
45 YABY
A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away....
SC 01 EXT SPACE
A vast sea of stars serves as the backdrop for a TITLE ROLL, which crawls into infinity....
EPISODE 10
THE ORDU MENACE
Screenplay by Brent Sohlden Koivopolo V
TEN YEARS after the defeat of PALPATINE'S SINISTER CLONE by REY AND BEN, after BEN's NINE YEAR REPUBLIC PRISON TERM and a ONE YEAR ENGAGEMENT of REY and BEN, the pair MARRY in the LAKE COUNTRY OF NABOO. MEANWHILE, DURING THE PRISON TERM and ENGAGEMENT, THE JEDI ORDER HAS BEEN REESTABLISHED and a NEW GENERATION of JEDI LEARNERS, MASTERS and KNIGHTS has EMERGED.
SUDDENLY, a LONE FORTRESS populated by CLONES of an ANCIENT SECT OF JEDI returns from UNKNOWN GALACTIC REGIONS after THOUSANDS OF YEARS to the FOURTH MOON OF YAVIN in search of an ANCIENT CITADEL. MEANWHILE the NEW REPUBLIC has signed the SECOND CORUSCANT ACCORDS, an agreement of tentative PEACE between the NEW REPUBLIC and the REMNANTS of the EMPIRE. The EVIL GRAND ADMIRAL THRAWN is PLANNING a COUP that will subject the ENTIRE GALAXY back in the VICE GRIP of the EMPIRE, STARTING TO BESEIGE MANY OUTER AND MID-RIM WORLD, ULTIMATELY aiming for the FRAGILE HEART OF THE NEW REPUBLIC. ONLY REY, BEN, and a small band of REBELS and the SLOWLY GROWING JEDI ORDER REORGANIZED by JEDI MASTERS BEN and REY stand between the GROWING FORCES OF EVIL and the FREEDOM LOVING CITIZENS of the GALAXY....
Note end of episode 9 will be rewritten so #BenSoloLives
PS if you wish to comment on or discuss this script or you are George Lucas and wish to suggest ideas (no one else can) or if you wish to critique or comment, there is or will be an Episode 10 discussion thread in Star Wars talk, or you may start threads to discuss it and all things Star Wars.-BLSKV
Synopsis of trilogy:
Raw Elements:
Ysilimari
J'orus C'baoth
Grand Admiral Thrawn
Luuke (Pronounced Loo-OOk) an evil clone made from Luke's hand and C'boath's Apprentice
Rey or Lady Palpatine
The Ordu Aspectu Fortress returning from hyperspace after thousands of years who introduce themselves to Jedi Masters Rey and Ben and the Jedi Order as an ancient unorthodox Jedi sect.
Yavin 4
A map room on that planet in the Massassi Temple. The Aspectu clones come there at the beginning of 10 to find the Citadel on the Planet Bupa where there is also an ancient Jedi Temple on the Planet's other side, in a different climate, as an aside which will likely not figure into this Trilogy but in a Live Action Network Televisision Series I am now scripting and storyboarding in my Diary which will star Hayden Christensen as Anakin Skywalker and Ian McDiarmid, Ewan MacGregor and a whole host of others as well as someone who can play Ahsoka well and another actress who can play Asajj Ventress well and a Deep Faked Christopher Lee enhanced with CAVE-I CGI--as an aside to an aside, what a shock, a Star Wars planet that actually has more than ONE WORLDWIDE CLIMATE. Oy yeld eyeroll--Anyway, at the Aspectu Citadel they plan to harvest the DNA of Padawans because where they went and have returned from after thousands of years, they ran out of Midichlorians to perpetuate both the Force Sensitivity and basic existence of their cloned species/Jedi sect with, and rather than sacrifice their own Aspectu, they come back to this galaxy to harvest. For the act of harvesting Midichlorians kills any Jedi who is harvested and you cant harvest Midichlorians from a dead corpse (A KJV mistranslation better in the Inspired Version. I aint ever heard of a corpse that wasn't dead, have you?), which, (the fact that harvesting mc's kills ya and the aspectu need more, that is explained, I mean) is all explained in the scripts 10-12.
Rey searching Jedi archives on Chandrilla for records about the Ordu Aspectu only to be shocked by scholar who was seemingly on the Imperial side before her death eight years ago, Korin Aphra who says they sacrifice Padawans to try to achieve immortality by harvesting their midichlorians. Armed with this knowledge she and Ben and Grogu return from Chandrilla to where a group of Padawans, about to be taken by shuttles to the Citadel on Bupa and sacrificed, has gone ostensibly to learn about ancient Jedi lore from the Aspectu at their fortress. Walking in surruptitiosly as if she is just there merely to witness their education, she ignites her saber, contends with the Aspectu clones, Ben, Grogu Rey and three other Jedi vanquish them after a long struggle, and the children are rescued, but there is still Thrawn, C'boath, Luuke and the Noghri, whom we meet in Episode 11 on their homeworld of Honoghr, and remnants of the First Order to contend with in Episode 12. Luuke is a mighty cunning warrior and foe with a dark agenda of his own and is vanquished quite satisfyingly in Episode 12 as Thrawn's Galactic domination campaign draws to a close. Contrast that to 'The Last Command' where Luuke was just a mindless zombie who said little if anything and could use a lightsaber well. The children are rescued at the conclusion of 10: The Ordu Menace. In 12: Rise of the Jedi, Ezra Bridger has a lot of screentime. (Need to watch Ahsoka series first. Please, God, don't let Thrawn die in the Ahsoka series, in Christ's Mighty name I pray, Amen.) I may have to wait for more of the Kennedy/Filoni/Favraeuverse to be released and watch it in fan reactions on YouTube or research it on the internet or by reading books before I know how to handle Ezra properly, but Thrawn's name drop in The Mandolorian Season 2: Episode 5: The Jedi demands that both Rosaria Dawson and whoever they chose to play Bridger (and possibly Sabine Wren) must have a lot of screentime in Episode 12, and possibly I can add some vital scene into 11: Thrawn Strikes! later long after I or Cardinal West and I have completed it. I do not believe it would be wise to stick them in Episode 10, however, as the first Episode in a trilogy usually is meant to set up the story mainly while the second two movies elucidate the story more. To show too much too soon would be a blunder on my part. Like in Episode 13 I only referenced the Geonosians and a Death Star Fleet twice, but didn't show the Hope Stars until Episode 14, and saved the best fireworks and pyrotechnics for the conclusion of Act 2 of Episode 15 (boy it will give the modelmaker dept a big headache but they'll get over it and look back with pride at their time spent making Star Wars Episode 15:The Destruction of the Sith a living cinematic reality) and which is also why not a single Palpatine clone died in Episode 13, but I saved all the #Palpdeathkillcounts for Episodes 14-15. At any rate I do want to finish Episodes 10-11 by December 31, 2021 AD, with or without Ezra Bridger, Hera and Sabine's scenes (possibly more of Zeb's too). So here goes.
So as of now (the same time I wrote the last two paragraphs in this post) I have written the first 11 scenes already, or at least started Scene 11 before I got a huge case of writer's block and put it off for more or less seven days, but now I'm back at it with renewed fervor and inspiration. Still don't know how I will continue Scene 11. I'll pray about that and put in some more character dialogue before moving on to the Reylo wedding scene. Boy, I hope one of my actors doesn't say to me essentially but not exactly what Harrison Ford once said to George Lucas during the making of Star Wars: "George, you can write this stuff but you can't say it." He may have had a point cos he a wise boy that Harrison. It was Fisher that had the drug problem. But she had a good heart, that woman. But I'm rambling again....
For On Coruscant, Thrawn just doesnt attempt a coup, he performs the coup right at the middle of Episode 10 and with C'boath, whom he is protected from by the 'mari, abolishes the Second Coruscant Accords mid-film after the preliminaries, just as Rey and Ben are wisin' up to the Aspectu's game and Luuke is sent to assassinate them, and seizes control of the Outer rim and Mid Rim, pincing the worlds between those vital sectors in a vice grip with a superweapon called the Hammer with
Coruscant as the prize.
45 YABY
A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away....
SC 01 EXT SPACE
A vast sea of stars serves as the backdrop for a TITLE ROLL, which crawls into infinity....
EPISODE 10
THE ORDU MENACE
Screenplay by Brent Sohlden Koivopolo V
TEN YEARS after the defeat of PALPATINE'S SINISTER CLONE by REY AND BEN, after BEN's NINE YEAR REPUBLIC PRISON TERM and a ONE YEAR ENGAGEMENT of REY and BEN, the pair MARRY in the LAKE COUNTRY OF NABOO. MEANWHILE, DURING THE PRISON TERM and ENGAGEMENT, THE JEDI ORDER HAS BEEN REESTABLISHED and a NEW GENERATION of JEDI LEARNERS, MASTERS and KNIGHTS has EMERGED.
SUDDENLY, a LONE FORTRESS populated by CLONES of an ANCIENT SECT OF JEDI returns from UNKNOWN GALACTIC REGIONS after THOUSANDS OF YEARS to the FOURTH MOON OF YAVIN in search of an ANCIENT CITADEL. MEANWHILE the NEW REPUBLIC has signed the SECOND CORUSCANT ACCORDS, an agreement of tentative PEACE between the NEW REPUBLIC and the REMNANTS of the EMPIRE. The EVIL GRAND ADMIRAL THRAWN is PLANNING a COUP that will subject the ENTIRE GALAXY back in the VICE GRIP of the EMPIRE, STARTING TO BESEIGE MANY OUTER AND MID-RIM WORLD, ULTIMATELY aiming for the FRAGILE HEART OF THE NEW REPUBLIC. ONLY REY, BEN, and a small band of REBELS and the SLOWLY GROWING JEDI ORDER REORGANIZED by JEDI MASTERS BEN and REY stand between the GROWING FORCES OF EVIL and the FREEDOM LOVING CITIZENS of the GALAXY....
