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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Nov 18, 2023 8:40:22 GMT -6
WARNING: SPOILERS FOR RECENT STAR WARS, JAMES BOND AND OTHER FRANCHISES SUCH AS MCU MOVIES AND STEPHEN KING'S DARK TOWER SERIES
Title: Star Wars Crossovers, and some Marvel, male privatesens, Doyle and Trek Too: A Marvelous Fictional Fantasy
Author: study888, formerly study3600, aka Brent Sohlden, though I invite ideas and maybe some limited collaboration.
Status: Begun, ongoing.
Plot: A package. A contraption. Fun. Maybe a lot of adventure. Lots of tearful reunions.
Genre: Pure fantasy, self-inserting, writing pleasure, may be entertaining for many.
Why: Because it's interesting and a fascinating subject to explore.
How: I just write it.
Rating PG-13 for possible mature themes and maybe mild language and mild stimulating references.
Note: This is not for NaNoWriMo, as I began this years before November of this year, maybe one and a half at least, but it sure beats being bored out of my skull, and maybe I can entertain people who like these kind of stories. I invite concrit as always, and comments, even suggestions on characters/situations/settings I can employ in this story.
Although this is far from a serious story, it is written as if it was seriously happening seriously in a background of semi at least concrete reality. This could be counted as a Star Wars fanfic because there's so many SW characters in it. If you hate this story, feel free to tell me so and why. Since the fanfic section has unlimited perpetual editing, I may just change the story to suit you if I feel that would work better for the story. I already wrote the first 30 pages, but that was a first draft only, and this may vary widely from the actual story. So here goes:
Chapter 1
One day, a Wednesday, on a snowless winter's day in January of 2024 AD, I awaited my love in my place.
Around 12 Noon I heard a loud THUMP THUMP THUMP THUMP up some stairs that led to where I live. I heard a knock on my front door. It was my love. She had a large flat package, taller than her, addressed to me.
"What is this thing, Brent?" she asked curiously.
I got a knife and opened the package after setting it on the floor. It was a metal door frame, with a computer kiosk welded onto the side that was already powered on. There was a note attached to the machine:
'You may bring ANY character from the world of fiction into reality. There is no consequence in the fabric of time-space-reality, but what you bring may have dire consequences for your world, so choose wisely.'
I did not read this note to her, but simply told her I'd deal with it later, after she left. We talked and I showed her a Star Wars Episode, then she left.
After I sang a hymn of thanksgiving and prayed that I would choose wisely, I typed into the kiosk that I wanted Anakin Skywalker after Return of the Jedi, only back in his Clone Wars Prime, and with his Padme Amidalla by his side.
Anakin and Padme stepped out of the nether into my living room.
"Is this the afterlife? Are you an Angel?" Anakin asked me.
"Where am I? I was just in the Senate making an important motion!" Padme uttered.
Then she saw Anakin, "Ani, what are you doing here? What am I doing here? Where is here? This is a strange place to me." She held her head in her hands. "I'm so confused." she sobbed.
"I'm Brent. You two are in a galaxy far, far away from yours, actually in a different reality than yours, and I have heard of your great adventures. Welcome."
"But I'm dead! This doesn't make any sense. Where's God? May I speak to an angel?" Anakin asked firmly.
Padme said to her husband "What do you mean, dead? You're right here. I'm alive. You're alive. We're in a strange galaxy in some alternate reality. We must have been teleported or something. Through a portal."
Then a look of realization dawned on Anakin's face. Padme? Padme! I'm so glad to see you again! Emperor Palpatine told me you were dead; that I'd killed you! Years and years ago! Then I tried to get you back and your shadow ghost told me I was dead to you. I lived year after year in pain, in agony, in heartache and despair! And now, here you are, back again, and so am I!
They embraced and kissed tenderly, though when she pulled back from the kiss she had a confused look on her face.
"I don't remember dying, or telling you you were dead to me. I remember the last I saw you you were off to fight on Umbarra in the War. But you are still the same Anakin I remember. I feel it."
Then another look of realization crossed Anakin's face, and sadness. He placed both hands on Padme's shoulders. "Padme," he said "I've done some awful things. I've slaughtered millions, even Younglings. I've made a Kyber Crystal sing a hymn of darkness after stealing it from a man I slew, to whom it rightfully belonged, and what's worse, I helped Palpatine, who was a Sith Lord, hunt down and slaughter hundreds of the Jedi Order."
Padme backed away, shrugging off his hands. "I-I don't believe what I'm hearing! How-how could you?"
Anakin looked into her eyes. "But after many years of reigning with Palpatine, I became obsessed with finding my son, Luke."
"I - I have no son. I was never even pregnant." Padme stammered.
Anakin realized something else
More later, GTG -~study
Watching TLJ on D +, and WHAT AN AWESOME MOVIE! Why do people criticize this movie so much? ? ? ? ? Anyway, back to the story........
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Nov 18, 2023 8:41:52 GMT -6
(continued from last paragraph) ,for his eyes showed it. "You see," Anakin explained to Padme, "to be a Padme from the past, the things not experienced by you will be things the Padme of the future have experienced. You will have a son, Luke and a daughter. I do not know her name, I read about her from Luke's loud thoughts. When Luke refused to turn to the Dark Side of the Force,
(a rather short addition, I know, and my last for today, but I have to go for now. Bye.-study).
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Nov 18, 2023 8:43:29 GMT -6
(continued from last post....) Palpatine tried to destroy him. I had compassion on him and destroyed Palpatine, spared Luke and I turned back to the Light."
Just then my phone rang. The ring tone was Rey's Theme from The Force Awakens. " Nice music" Anakin complimented. It was Colt on the phone. He wanted to know if he could come over later. I said "yes, come on over".
"What sort of communicator device was that?" Padme asked when I hung up.
"A cellular telephone" I said.
"Hmmm..." Padme said. "And you say you died, Anakin? Well, I forgive you...for everything." They Embraced again.
Chapter 2
I was at the Kiosk again and typed in that I wanted Sherlock Holmes, and Dr. Watson only I want Sherlock to be at a stage in his life where he is off drugs and intoxicating liquors.
Out of the nether walked Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson.
Anakin piped up "You look like a CorSec Detective and you look like a Medic."
Sherlock said: "Correct. I was in my study reading when I found myself here. Watson, my companion, was poring over the casefiles he spent much of his life writing for The Strand and I see that together we were transmorgified right here to where we are, which I deduce is a flat in America for I see the Star Spangled Banner prominently displayed here in your living room in at least three places, and I deduce that you two are a couple from how close you are standing and you are from very far away and a different place and culture judging by your dress and posture and we are in the future given your strange technologies, and you are a bachelor, which I deduce from the observation that this is a one bedroom flat and there is no sign of any female living here, and you take good care of your pet cat, for he is lying there on his side on your davenport happy and content. And this man is a Knight of some regular order, and his wife looks like a Senator.
"I also deduce that they were transported to this flat by the same means, this doorway here, that myself and Watson were."
I was impressed. "So far you are 100% accurate."
"This 'CorSec' that this young man speaks of must be the Security Force for a place that begins with the letters C-O-R, for that is also elementary."
"Your powers of deduction rival mine, good sir," said Anakin. "What is your name?"
"Sherlock Holmes, at your service. And what a fine Winter's Day it is!" Anakin reached for his lightsaber, to examine it.
"My old saber!" He exclaimed. He carefully ignited it, it's blue blade crackling with raw energy.
"Fascinating" said Watson. "How is it done?"
"Crystals, my dear Watson." Said Sherlock matter-of-factly.
"You are right," confirmed Anakin. "A Kybur Crystal."
"A type of crystal specialized to wherever you are from" Sherlock said. "There are no Kaibur Crystals in this universe."
"Hmmm...." Anakin said. Then he deignited his blade.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Nov 18, 2023 8:50:09 GMT -6
Chapter 3
LaterColt came over. Sherlock and Watson were reading my Scriptures and Anakin was watching YouTube videos on my laptop. Padme had gone for a walk outside. Colt came into my apartment and he said 'hey, what's up, Brent.' He gave me a Dr. Pepper can and I drank with great relish. "You look like Anakin Skywalker from Star Wars." he said. "You even dress like him."
"Well, I am him, so...." Anakin said.
"No jokes"Colt said, believing.
He opened his Dr. Pepper and drank.
Colt introduced himself to Anakin and to Sherlock and Watson. When they introduced themselves to him he said, "No jokes. The Sherlock Holmes and Watson, you say? Elementary, my Dear, Elementary, " He imitated.
"This Book of Mormon is fascinating. When Watson wrote A Study In Scarlet, one of my first cases, my opinion because of that case was decidedly coloured against the Mormons. But this book doesn't countenance the behavior of that cult at all, making me wonder if there is some other sect that believes in the Volume," Sherlock exclaimed.
"Actually there are several. Soon I will be baptized into one of them, the Restructured Church." I said.
"I have been comparing the Inspired Version of the Bible with your King James, and find the Inspired one remarkably superior." Watson said.
"What do those books say. I tried reading them but the language is foreign to me."
"From what I have read of them, they say God created this earth in 6 Days, Rested the Seventh Day, flooded the earth at least once (if Plato is to be believed, more than once), saved Noah and Gilgamesh at least if there be any truth to the Gilgamesh epics, called Abram, chose the Jews, from the Jews came a Christ or Messiah, and some Jews came to America and became the Indians, and Christ also came to them, and he is coming again a third time in Glory, and there will be other heavens and earths to come. This from an elementary reading of some of the modern day revelations in the Doctrine and Covenants. This, in a nutshell, is the message of the Books, my dear Anakin."
"Do you want to see this machine work?" I asked Colt.
"Yes"
"Gandalf, NO!" I said when my cat started trying to get into my chocolate pretzels I had bought yesterday and was now snacking on. I put my hand up and he backed away slighty.
Colt asked if I could bring the Wizard Gandalf here.
"He wouldn't be able to pipe in the house," I said. "But it may be a great idea. I'd love to meet him."
I typed some words into the kiosk and out of the doorframe walked Gandalf the White, but he looked a little confused.
We all introduced ourselves, but Gandalf gaped a little, and for hours, until nightfall (Padme returned) remained silent, still looking a little confused. Holmes and Dr. Watson continued to read (Holmes had moved on to A History of the Christian Church by Williston Walker) and Anakin and Colt sat with me on the sofa watching Tubi, YouTube and Disney + and Pluto TV. Padme walked in and said hi to Gandalf, and introduced herself as Senator Amidala.
"Who am I?" said Gandalf.
"You are Gandalf the White, Wielder of the Sacred Flame of Anor"
Recognition flared up in his eyes as he looked up at his staff, and then he said some sacred words and his staff lit up. "Yes. Gandalf the White. And you have all identified yourselves to me. We are Seven. Our several paths have converged to This Point. A Detective, a Doctor, a Writer and Theologian, a Philosopher and Believer, a Senator, a Knight and lastly, me, a White Wizard. We are a Fellowship of Seven. And I perceive that we have a Sacred Duty to bring love compassion and lasting change to the New World most of us have found ourselves in this Day."
"You have my pen" I said.
"And my mind" Colt said.
"And mine," said Sherlock.
"And my saber," said Anakin.
"And my oratory," said Padme.
"And my Medic's Bag," said Watson.
As we said these things, our hands met in the center of our circle, and then we lifted them up having pledged our honors to the cause.
"I'm planning on bringing others into our fellowship, including intelligent robots," I told Gandalf.
"Wait..until the morrow. Let us all go our seperate ways tonight, lest we crowd this young man's house. I perceive his landlord would have an adverse reaction if we were to all of us lodge here," said Gandalf.
"Agreed," said me and Anakin together.
That night I wrote in my Diary about the Day's proceedings.
My Diary was glad to hear it.
Colt left shortly after I wrote in my Diary.
I went to bed, and slept all night, having pleasant dreams.
Chapter 4
I had given all of the six members of our Fellowship some hard and fast rules to live by in our modern society and Gandalf had certified that they had best live by them strictly, as did I.
Two weeks later, I got a cellphone call. It was Anakin.
He said the best person in Colts judgment and Anakin's and Gandalf's to bring into this world from their perusal of this world's fiction (Anakin and Padme and Gandalf had all learned how to read American English and other earth languages. (and speak some foreign languages and write them)) was Roland Deschain of Gilead. Gandalf had read the entire Dark Tower Series to Colt in a week and he judged him a great character. Colt suggested also bringing Eddie and Susannah Dean and Jake Chambers and Oy but Gandalf advised against too much too soon.
He then said all the Fellowship fared well in the wide world and in space travels far and wide, and we said bye and hung up. I wondered with amusement how Rowland would react to seeing the earth from space. I also desired to see that, and to visit the moon myself, and Mars. I knew with the subspace engines Anakin could build easily that would be possible. I was very excited as I typed into the Kiosk
ROLAND DESCHAIN OF GILEAD AFTER HE CAME TO THE DARK TOWER THE FINAL TIME AND BLEW THE HORN.
Note: At 2:44 AM CDT shortly after publishing this part of my story, my last Daily Update for today (there was only one today, and I have deviated vastly from my first draft by now), I have just finished Loki S2X1&2...WoW, Awesome! Loved it. Now I will rewatch Ahsoka S 1X5 and I may watch YouTube videos after that, or more Ahsoka or both. I hope they make an Ahsoka S2 and a Loki S3. Ciou. ~study
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Nov 18, 2023 8:51:43 GMT -6
Chapter 5
"I have a big headache," Roland said.
"Have you any Astin?"
"I have Tylenol. It's a mild painkiller. I'm Brent of Missouri. I Drew you here through a Door to this world."
He smiled. "Astin. Please thankee. Then we'll talk." He rubbed the back of his neck with vigor.
I got him some Tylenol from my medicine cabinet and gave him that and a Dixie cup of water.
He took it.
"Tell me what happened when you Ascended the Tower." I said.
"I got to the top and then I remembered I had done it all before and Gan was at the Top and he told me since I had blown the horn it would be my final time then he took me up with his hands and placed me in this world facing you. My headache's a lot better now, thankee."
Note: GTG4n There may be another update later tonight.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Nov 18, 2023 8:52:39 GMT -6
Hello there, folks. Sorry, been gone a while. You know, DRL (Darth Real Life) and other valid and invalid excuses keeping me away from writing.
Plus I haven't worked on NaNoWriMo in many days. I know, that's terrible
I invite comments and concrit because I would appreciate feedback for this story....now I will continue it.
The first thing I did after our long palaver during which I told him about my life and current situation and he shared his life up until now with me, was show Roland on Disney+ the six hour Star Wars OG Trilogy, gauging his reactions. He was quite agitated at times, excited at others and gasped when Alderaan was destroyed, shrugged his shoulders when the death stars were blown up and made remarks about how unrealistic a lot of the deaths were. He was rather amused at the assortment of various droids and obvious aliens. He stayed overnight on my fold out sofa bed, and the next day I showed him the Prequels and Sequels. He remarked that the acting was poor in the prequels and the character development was very poor in the sequels, and people acted contrary to what they would naturally do. I went to the door and I asked Roland if either Finn and Rey or Finn and Rose had more chemistry. He said Finn and Rose had kissed and spent a lot of time getting to know each other and gunslinging together, so I punched in Finn and Rose lovers, married.
Out came Finn and Rose.
They were not happy.
"Where the hell are we?" said Rose.
"Why the hell are we here?" Echoed Finn. "Who are you?"
"Roland Deschain of Gilead, line of Arthur Eld. Thankee."
"Brent Sohlden of Missouri, line of Koivopolo. Thankee."
"I wonder what planet we're even on, dear" Rose said to her husband.
"Whatever planet it is, I don't think it's a New Republic world." Finn said flatly.
"This is a Republic. We are in the United States of America, planet Earth, Milky Way Galaxy".
"That's not on any of the star charts,"
Finn said.
It was about 8PM.
"There's a hotel on the corner of the main stretch of highway around here." I said. "Just plop down some of your credits at the counter and they'll give you a room for the night. Anakin told me they take credits because it resembles valuable metal."
"Wait, you know Anakin Skywalker? He's like, dead. He's the grandfather of Ben Solo." Finn queried.
"I brought him and his wife here to this world through the same door I brought you two through." I said. "I'll show you two The Last Jedi and then you can walk to the hotel. Roland can stay here another night or strike out on his own."
"What's 'The Last Jedi'? Rose asked.
"You'll see." As we watched, Roland read some of my Scriptures.
During the film, Rose and Finn remarked that this or that was not the way it actually happened, and that "that's a sucky version of me".
I told them I for one still liked and enjoyed the movie, and they conceded that it did tell the essence of what happened, but could have told it much better, but was a decent enough film.
Thoughts? This installment admittedly wasn't as imaginative or well- thought- out as my last several but I hope it gets better. Have a good day people and may the Force be with you always. Caou.
....8:11 AM CDT I just watched Loki S2X3. My favorite so far.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Dec 14, 2023 8:13:14 GMT -6
Ok, here is a big addition to the story, and I'm about to introduce a bunch of characters with little or no exposition now. Don't worry, all or most of those desired character/character / character/RL interactions will come later. - BLS 11/26/023
Chapter 6
After Finn and Rose left, Roland lodged at my place one more night then he struck out with Gandalf, Holmes and Watson for a journey on foot to Independence, Missouri the next morning. Gandalf and the sleuthing team came to pick him up after Gandalf called my phone.
Later, Anakin came over with Colt, and when they came to call, the One I was courting was visiting me, playing Monopoly with me.
I dealt in Colt and Anakin into the game and the three of us taught the game to Anakin. Anakin ended up beating us all. Anakin asked for Luke Skywalker and his sister to be brought through the door. I did so, and also brought Mara Jade Skywalker, Han and Chewie, R2 and 3PO, and Ben Solo after he turned to the Light and Rey after she beat Palpatine, married to Ben.
Soon my apartment was positively crowded.
"Oh, dear, what a cramped space this is." C-3PO said.
"Where are we?" Han and Leia said in unison.
"Father?" Luke said.
"Daughter." Anakin said to Leia.
GTG- gotta go to Church. Byeeee MTFBWYA
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Dec 14, 2023 8:19:35 GMT -6
R2 whistled and chortled.
I asked for a perpetual portable power source for R2 and 3PO to come through the door and out came two mobile charging stations for them.
"Brent, why Chewie?" the woman I was courting asked.
"Han would hate not having Chewie" I said matter-of-factly.
As he hugged Han, his head almost hit the ceiling of my apartment. He then let go, and roared.
"What is he saying?" Colt asked Han.
"He wants to be with his tribe or family" Han said. "He said he was just with them."
I punched in "Mallatobuck, Itchy and Lumpawaroo". When they were drawn throught the door, they were taller than I expected.
Artoo beeped.
"Artoo says we should all go outside." 3PO said.
It was a snowy, icy day.
I put Monopoly away and we all had a long palaver after the Chewbacca family embraced with fond kisses.
Then we all went outside (fortunately, they all had coats in their packs) and we had a long palaver.
Luke decided the group would explore the world using the hard fast rules I gave them to abide by. We decided R2, 3PO and the Chewbacca family should stick with Anakin and Padme.
Anakin and Leia had a long talk alone.
Then Anakin, Leia and Luke talked alone.
Rey and Ben kissed tenderly.
Then they were all gone, the One I was courting stayed a little and spent a little more time with me before we parted ways for the night.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Dec 14, 2023 8:27:31 GMT -6
Ok, here's my big update, a new chapter I wrote tonight after watching Stagecoach, made in 1939, in the midst of watching an ArTorr Mando Documentary after watching his TBB Doc and talking to YouTube's Star Wars Santa, then seeing Santa in a Christmas Parade in the rain on my bike after buying 5 random Western Novels, one by Louis L'Amour and reading about 20 pages of the first one and loving it, and also after going out to eat with my friend at a Chinese restaurant and witnessing to him, and while drinking Pero, milk and honey and listening to Christmas music after I updated my computer Diary. All this must have put me in a writing mood  -BLS"study"
Chapter 7
For the next several months, I stared at it, wondering where it had come from, afraid of bringing more individuals through the door lest I overload the Solego circuit within. My fiance' and I were wed, and we spent time living at both our places since she was rich. My apartment improved so much internally in appearance with a woman's touch. My house became a home, and so was her place. The doorframe soon became forgotten, largely ignored by both of us. It collected dust. Occasionally, I would get postcards and keep up correspondence through letters with the individuals I had drawn with the device. These cheered me up, always reminding me of the reality of the doorway, and what it still could do. Anakin and Obi-Wan had dueled a friendly duel on the Moon and on Mars, and had made friends with the Lunar and Martian Nephilim in those two places (Anakin had returned to my apartment one day a couple months ago and drawn Ahsoka, Obi-Wan in his Clone Wars prime, Captain Rex in his prime married to an Ahsoka in her 30's with a memory of all her life's experiences, and Sabine and Ezra Bridger (married to each other) and Duchess Satine into this Universe, and then we had brought them all up to speed, then they departed, and later Obi-Wan had gotten married to Satine (I showed Satine and Obi-Wan Moulin Rouge. Now it's their favorite movie. It was the first time I had seen it. It had been Early Spring, 2025). Finn and Rose had honeymooned in Paris, then Venice, then Rome, then Vienna, Austria. Sherlock Holmes had started assisting the Independence Police Force with cases (they didn't believe he was actually Sherlock Holmes) and Roland and Watson had trekked with Colt all the way to Oklahoma on the backroads of America, a little Ka-tet. Gandalf was taking University courses at Cambridge and now knew how to drive and fly aeroplanes, which he described as technological wonders of this Age. Occasionally, I found YouTube videos showing the wherabouts of C-3PO and the other Droids and Chewie and his family and made a personal Playlist of their real life appearances. Because of Covenant Eyes, I couldn't comment on the videos, but Chewie Lumpy, Itchy and Malla all learned how to write English and they and I wrote letters back and forth. They each had lots of questions for me. Christmas of 2025my wife became pregnant with our first son, and my cat Gandalf seemed happier than he had been in a long time. But little did I know that the adventure was just getting started for me and my wife. And I would soon find out just who had sent the device to me. Well, that's my update. Feedback and concrit would be appreciated. Thank you-Brent Concrit means constructive criticism but here on this site you are allowed to totally express hatred and contempt for my story if you so desire. 12-13-2023 Expect another update soon, with much more excitement, possible adventure and a lot more happening.-BLS"study" |
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