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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 15, 2021 21:16:54 GMT -6
SC 47 EXT UKIO-DAYThe Chimera hovers as a transmission to the planet is heard:THRAWN: (V.O.)This is the Imperial Star Destroyer Chimera. I declare the Ukia System is once again under the mandate of Imperial Law and the protection of Imperial Forces. You will lower your shields, recall all vehicles unto their bases and prepare for an orderly transfer of command. If you fail to respond, I will have to presume that you mean to resist the Empire. In that extremity I will have no choice but to open hostilities. SC 48 INT CHIMERA-BRIDGE-CLOSE-UP OF THRAWN'S FACE-SPACE V.O.: They are sending another request for assistance, even more panicked than the last. THRAWN: I'm certain the next one will be even more so. Prepare for firing sequence one, Master C'baoth. SC 49 INT STAR ROOM-CHIMERA-SPACEAs C'BAOTH meditates, he responds to THRAWN.C'BAOTH: The cruisers are ready, Grand Admiral Thrawn, as am I. THRAWN: Be sure that you are. Unless the thing is absolutely perfect, the entire show will be worse than useless. Turbolaser battery, standby, firing sequence on on my mark....3....2...1..FIRE! SC 50 EXT UKIO-DAYThe planet is fired upon by a salvo from the turbolaser blasts of the Chimera. People on the surface run in a panic, many die and much sand is turned into glass, many of their buildings and other structures are destroyed.
SC 51 EXT UKIO-POV OF THE CLOAKED SHIPS INTERCUT WITH POV OF THE UKIANS-DAYIt looks like the Chimera is firing on the planet through their defense shield from the point of view of the Ukians. PULL back to the point of view of just above the CLOAKED ships to show that this is an optical illusion, and as the Chimera's turbolaser batteries strike the ENERGY SHIELD, the towed CLOAKED VESSELS in turn and at the EXACT SAME time, fire upon the planet below, giving the APPEARANCE that the EMPIRE has developed an ENERGY SHIELD-PIERCING WEAPON.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 15, 2021 22:24:34 GMT -6
SC 52 INT UKIO-SHELTERS
We see children being held by their mothers, husbands embracing wives in shelters. There is much weeping and mourning.
SC 53 INT CHIMERA-BRIDGE-SPACE
Grand Admiral Thrawn sits on his chair, steepling his fingers.
THRAWN: Prepare firing sequence three, Master C'baoth.
C'BAOTH: (V.O.) Cruisers are ready.
THRAWN: Turbolaser battery three, standy, firing sequence three on my mark, 3....2....1...FIRE!
SC 54 EXT UKIO-DAY
The third sequence of TURBOLASER BLASTS are even MORE DEVASTATING than the FIRST and the SECOND, the CARNAGE EXCEEDING ANYTHING that has GONE BEFORE. People DESPERATELY try to find ANY shelter they POSSIBLY can. The TURBOLASERS stop.
MAN: (V.O.) We would ask you to cease your bombardment of Ukio and we will discuss your terms of surrender.
THRAWN: (V.O.) My terms are simple. You will lower your planetary shield and permit my forces to land. Any fighting vehicles will be turned over to Imperial control. And though you will, of course, be ultimately answerable to the Empire, your political, religious, and social systems will remain under your control, provided your people behave themselves, of course.
MAN: (V.O.) There will be no wartime taxes levied, no forced conscription of our youth?
SC 55 INT CHIMERA-BRIDGE-SPACE
Thrawn sits with steepled fingers.
THRAWN: No to your second question, a qualified 'no' to your first. As you are obviously aware, most Imperial worlds are currently under war status taxation level. However, there are exceptions. And it is likely that your share of the war effort will come directly from your extensive food production and processing facilities.
MAN: (V.O.) We will lower the planetary shields, Chimera, as a gesture of good faith. But before we lower our shields, we shall require guarantees regarding the safety of the Ukian people and our land.
THRAWN: Certainly.
SC 56 EXT SPACE
The PLANETARY SHIELD LOWERS. Imperial SHIPS start to LAND immediately.
SC 57 INT MILLENNIUM FALCON-SPACE
REY and BEN sit before a MINI HOLOGRAPHIC JEDI COUNCIL MEETING, where ALL TEN OTHER MEMBERS are around a miniature HOLOGRAPHIC circle in the SHIP's HOLD.
JEDI GRAND MASTER KLON: You must certainly go straight to Wayland. I forsee you will greatly need Lady Tano's assistance.
REY: I am concerned about my pregnancy. I am carrying a son. Ben and I will name him Luke. As you know, we were married on Naboo six months ago and we conceived him on our wedding night. There is a chance the master of that Luke clone who tried to kill us three times and that we escaped from three times, all due to the assistance of other, more powerful Jedi stepping in to intervene, there is a chance that that Dark Jedi Master might seek to influence the mind of our unborn child.
KLON: Then it is vital Lady Tano travel with you all the way to Wayland. Her pure spirit will be like a shield of protection from the Dark Lord's influence.
JEDI GRAND MASTER LEERSA: We have just received word that both the Ord Padron and Ukia Systems have fallen simultaneously while the Filve System is even now under heavy attack.
REY: Rest assured that our thoughts and our prayers go with them.
KLON: Meanwhile, there is good news. Thousands of new Jedi Temples and Hundreds of new Rebel Bases are now under construction. And more and more men women and children are entering them, asking to be trained as Jedi. To the tune of thousands. All right under Thrawn's nose, Ben!
BEN: This is such good news! Truly the Rise of the Jedi.
LEERSA: It is largely due to the mass persecution yet relative leniency of this New Empire that we are seeing such success! The days of chaincodes and oppressive tyranny is over. If I didn't know better, I'd say that Thrawn is turning out to be quite the benevolent dictator. But of course, I know better. He must be stopped or this will not last forever.
REY: Agreed.
KLON: This emergency session of the Jedi Council is hereby adjourned. May the Force be with us all.
One by one, every hologram within the hologram fades, save KLON, GORNEE and GRAND MASTER JIGFRA, who are actually on FARSHA IV, in the COUNCIL CHAMBER. Then they fade as well, from the MILLENNIUM FALCON'S GAME TABLE, where the meeting was HELD.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 0:45:15 GMT -6
SC 58 EXT SPACE AROUND FILVEA HUGE SPACE BATTLE ensues between IMPERIAL FORCES and REBEL SHIPS trying to PROTECT a MASS EVACUATION of FILVE.SC 59 INT-X-WING 1-COCKPIT-SPACE
PILOT 1: Red Group, Gold Group, cover me, we're taking out this Dreadnought. Protect the Bombers at all costs. Bombers, start your run NOW! SC 60 EXT SPACE
A Resistance Bomber loses ALL support as BOTH SQUADS OF X and B-WINGS surrounding it are WIPED out by a HORNET'S NEST OF TIE SPECIALS. THEN they turn on to the BOMBERS and ALL THREE OF THE BOMBERS EXPLODE IN MASSIVE CONFLAGERATIONS.
THEN the TIE SPECIALS start ATTACKING the X and A and Y-WING SQUADRONS PROTECTING ALL THE EVACUATION SHIPS and MEDICAL FRIGATES.
SUDDENLY THREE MORE X-WING SQUADRONS and TEN JEDI STARFIGHTERS join the fray and ALL spend nearly FIVE MINUTES putting up a VERY GOOD FIGHT, but the TIE SPECIALS COUPLED with DEADLY TURBOLASER BLASTS FROM the KATANA DREADNOUGHT make SPACE DUST out of all the RESISTANCE DEFENDERS, then the TIE SPECIALS SWARM the MEDICAL FRIGATES.SC 61 INT MEDICAL FRIGATE ONE-SPACE
Bacta tanks and Hospital Beds and Various Models of Medical Droids, Doctors, Nurses and Attendees abound everywhere, as do the WOUNDED, SICK and DYING. SUDDENLY EXPLOSIONS incinerate ALL OF IT. SC 62 EXT MEDICAL FRIGATE ONE-SPACE
The FRIGATE EXPLODES, BUSTING IN PIECES.
SCENE 63 EXT SPACEThe OTHER THREE MEDICAL FRIGATES BLOW APART, and the TIE SPECIALS start to pick off the defenses SURROUNDING the EVAC SHIPS.ONCE the defenses are weakened sufficiently, BLASTS from the DREADNOUGHT as it CONTINUES to PUMMEL the PLANET below, also START to PICK OFF the EVAC SHIPS ONE BY ONE until there are ZERO LEFT.The REMAINING REBEL SHIPS attempt to FLEE but are ROUTED and VANQUISHED by the TIES and the DREADNOUGHT.SC 64 INT DREADNOUGHT RELENTLESS-BRIDGE-SPACEA CLONE stands at attention before a LARGER THAN LIFE HOLOGRAM of GRAND ADMIRAL THRAWN.
CLONE COMMANDER COMPGARN: The Rebels at Filve put up a helluva fight, Sir, but we have vanquished them completely. THRAWN: Very good, Commander Compgarn. My fleet at Naboo report that the Rebels and Native Naboo are putting up an extremely good fight, and require immediate assistance. Set your course. COMPGARN: Right away, Admiral. SC 65 EXT SPACEThe DREADNOUGHT RELENTLESS and ALL OTHER IMPERIAL SHIPS AND FIGHTERS jump together into HYPERSPACE.
SC 66 SPACE AROUND NABOOThe NABOO, BOTH the NEWLY CONCEIVED OF NATIVE GUNGAN STARFIGHTERS and the BRIGHT YELLOW NABOO FIGHTERS AND SILVER SHAPELY NABOO MAN-OF -WAR DREADNOUGHTS AND ROYAL BLUE CURVY NABOO DESTROYERS are keeping the IMPERIAL DREADNOUGHT, STAR DESTROYERS and CRUISERS and TIES at bay, away from the PLANET, to avoid ANY possibility of an AERIAL BOMBARDMENT.
SC 67 INT GUNGAN STARFIGHTER 1-COCKPIT
GUNGAN PILOT 1: Activaten da bombad Bo-Ganya! From a CENTRAL ship, A GIANT FORCE FIELD ACTIVATES and SURROUNDS EVERY GUNGAN SHIP in their SQUAD.
The GUNGAN SQUAD PLOWS FOWARD, the SHIELD decimating ENTIRE SQUADRONS OF TIES. They head STRAIGHT for THE IMPERIAL DREADNOUGHT THE FULMINATRIX II
THE FORCE SHIELD GOES STRAIGHT IN ONE SIDE AND OUT THE OTHER OF THE DREADNOUGHT, LEAVING A GAPING HOLE the size of a CITY IN ITS MIDDLE SECTION. The DREADNOUGHT goes up in a BALL OF FLAME. A SECOND GUNGAN SQUADRON fights furiously with TIE SPECIALS and TIE INTERCEPTORS. The Gungans have the CLEAR ADVANTAGE over them. SC 68 INT. NABOO STARFIGHTER 1-COCKPIT
RIC OLLIE: Yahooo! Let's regroup, Royal Squadron, and show these Imps what we're made of! SC 69 EXT SPACE Just then the RELENTLESS and MANY OTHER IMPERIAL SHIPS AND FIGHTERS jump OUT OF HYPERSPACE.
SC 70 INT RELENTLESS-BRIDGE
As CLONE COMMANDER COMPGARN studies HOLOS of what he missed in the LOCAL BATTLE from different ANGLES, he gets a flash of light in his EYES, and says, 'AHA!'
SC 71 EXT SPACEAs the FIRST GUNGAN SQUADRON START UP THEIR SHIELD and PREPARE to TAKE OUT the RELENTLESS as well, A TROOP of DARKTROOPERS ZOOM THROUGH SPACE, PENETRATING THE SHIELD, TOO SWIFT for the GUNGAN STARFIGHTERS TO TAKE OUT while they are maintaining SHIELD STASIS. The DARKTROOPERS DESTROY the SHIP GENERATING the SHIELD, which COLLAPSES like A GIANT SPACE UMBRELLA. Then the GUNGANS destroy the DARKTROOPERS with their FIGHTERS' LASERS, but while they are distracted, the MUCH MORE SEASONED TIE SPCIAL SQUADS ROUT them and the ROYAL NABOO SQUADRON, ALSO taking out some of their CAPITAL SHIPS, and they call RETREAT and FLEE into HYPERSPACE. The IMPERIAL SHIPS IMMEDIATELY BEGIN THEIR INVASION of NABOO.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 1:26:17 GMT -6
SC 72 EXT SPACEThe MILLENNIUM FALCON and AHSOKA'S JEDI STARFIGHTER BLAST out of HYPERSPACEAs they approach Wayland, a RELATIVELY SMALL VESSEL STOPS and STANDS before them.
SC 73 INT MILLENNIUM FALCON-COCKPIT-SPACE
REY: Open a Comlink channel. They are hailing us. V.O.: Permission to dock with and board the Millennium Falcon, Lady Rey. REY: (To BEN) I sense no hostility. (To Comlink): Permission granted. SC 74 INT MILLENNIUM FALCON-HOLD-SPACE
A group of Noghri come aboard the SHIP.
LEADER: We greet you, Lady Palpatine. I am Cak'maim, Warrior of the Clan Eiku'mir. I lead the Honor Guard in your service and protection. To your service and protection we commit ourselves and our lives. REY: As the Mal'ary'ush, I accept your service.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 1:58:59 GMT -6
EIKH'MIR: My Lieutenant, Mob'vetar, Clan Ha'kar.
MOB'VETAR: (Bows) At your service, Lady Palpatine.
REY: My husband, Ben Solo-Skywalker.
EIKH'MIR: We greet you. The Noghri honor the consort of the Lady Palpatine.
BEN: Thanks, a pleasure meeting you, too.
EIKH'MAR's EYES go WIDE.
EIKH'MAR: Could it be? (Grabs Ben's LEFT HAND suddenly, sniffing it DEEPLY.) It is! We greet you, Lord Vader! We are most honoured by your presence. We are awestruck that the offspring of Lord Vader is the consort of the offspring of Lord Sidious! We shall triple our guard and do anything you ask.
BEN: We are on our way to Wayland. We could use some help keeping away the wild animals and unfriendly native tribes as we locate Thrawn's cloning facility down there. Would you do anything against Mi'th'raw'nuruodo?
MOB'VETAR: With all due respect to Thrawn, your orders now supersede his, as you we see as a MUCH greater POWER and AUTHORITY than he. Yes, we can help you. We intended to help you locate the facility on Wayland all along, which is why we came to dock with your GREAT and honoured vessel, the Millennium Falcon, knowing from our spies who monitor communications between Lu'uke and his Master Joruus C'baoth, two Dark Jedi who seek your utter destruction, your mission to Wayland below. While we cannot help you defeat them, being powerless to do so, we can and will help you find both their Cloning Facility and Hidden Mountain Fortress, as well as keep all hostile animals and native tribes at bay as you asked.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 2:12:03 GMT -6
SC 75 EXT SPACEThe Falcon, the NOGHRI SHIP and AHSOKA'S FIGHTER approach Wayland.SC 76 EXT WAYLAND-JUNGLE-DAY
The THREE SHIPS LAND ON A FLAT SURFACE IN A LARGE CLEARING. The NOGHRI disembark FIRST and SPREAD OUT, forming a SAFE PERIMETER AROUND AHSOKA, who gently and gracefully climbs out of her SHIP and WALKS CONFIDENTLY FORWARD with a GRACEFUL SMILE, and LANDO, CHEWIE and the FOUR JEDI followed by the FOUR DROIDS.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 3:18:48 GMT -6
SC 77 WAYLAND- ENCAMPMENT- JUNGLE-NIGHT
BEN and REY consult with TWO NOGHRI.
BEN: How much further to the Cloning Facility.
BAK'UR'AWDI: Our advance scouts report that it should take another six days by foot.
REY: We are nearly out of food and potable water. Can you obtain anything of that nature for us?
LIM'UR'CAN'I: You are Lady Palpatine and Lord Vader. You command and we obey. We shall hunt edible game for you and dig a well to obtain pure spring-water we can find with our technology. We will do so at once, Lady Palpatine.
A BAND of SIX NOGHRI IMMEDIATELY leave to do her bidding, leaving three OTHER NOGHRI PLUS LIM'UR'CAN'I and BAK'UR'AWDI.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 3:53:04 GMT -6
SC 78 EXT WAYLAND-WOODS-MIDDAY The PARTY OF ELEVEN walks SINGLE FILE to hide their NUMBERS.A BAND of SIX NOGHRI approach them, bearing HUGE PORTIONS OF COOKED MEAT on SIX SILVER PLATTERS AND TWELVE LARGE WATERSKINS.All the SAPIENT MEMBERS of the PARTY OF ELEVEN REJOICE and CHEER. SC 79 EXT SPACE AROUND CORUSCANTThe IMPERIAL DREADNOUGHT ADJUDICATOR , EIGHT SUPER STAR DESTROYERS, and many other IMPERIAL ships including STAR DESTROYERS CRUISERS and TIES GALORE, POP OUT OF HYPERSPACE. At their HEAD is the DREADED CHIMERA. SC 80 EXT BALCONY-CONDOMINIUM-CORUSCANT-DAYMON MOTHMA, CHANCELLOR OF THE NEW REPUBLIC, looks at the SKY with MACROBINOCULARS. Her DAUGHTER, FAWN MOTHMA, a CONFIDENT 35-YEAR OLD WOMAN with BRIGHT RED HAIR, FRECKLES and HER HAIR IN FIVE PIGTAILS that FALL BEHIND HER HEAD DOWN TO THE BACKS OF HER CALVES, COVERED UP BY LONG SLACKS DOWN TO HER ANKLES, comes up BEHIND HER.FAWN: Has the day arrived, Mother? MON: (Sighs) Yes, I'm afraid so, my dear child, I'm afraid so. FAWN: If the report is true from Ukio, and the Empire can now fire through our planetary shield, I fear the worst, mother. MON: I strongly suspect that it was some dastardly trick Thrawn played on the Ukian people. We are quite safe from any Imperial bombardment, but not from a blockade. And if the Empire controls our shipping, they control our planet, little one.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 4:28:54 GMT -6
SC 81 INT-CORUSCANT-REBEL STAGING ROOM- NEAR REBEL HANGAR BAYS
ADMIRAL ACKBAR: (Sucks in) The time has come, ladies and gentleman, to make our last stand at Coruscant, for if Coruscant falls, then so does the Republic.
POE: So when do we get to get out there and hand the Imperials their asses on a silver platter?
ACKBAR: Be patient, Poe. The timing must be right or our defense will suffer greatly. General Ezra Bridger, First Battalion of the Republic Fleet, and Commander of Alphabet Squadron.
EZRA BRIDGER steps up to the PODIUM.
EZRA: Now the Imperials thought they had the element of surprise, but we all knew this day would soon come. Shoot, everyone on Coruscant knew this day was coming. It was only a matter of when. So we are prepared. We will meet the Imperial threat with overwhelming numbers and our chief objective is to capture or destroy Grand Admiral Thrawn's flagship, the Chimera. Without Thrawn's orders the Imperial fleet will be in chaos. It will still be a threat, however. (Nods.) General Rex, Commander of Rogue Squadron and Chairman of the Rebel Army and Fleet.
COMMANDER REX steps up on the STAGE.
REX: (Presses a BUTTON on a REMOTE. A MAP of the SPACE around CORUSCANT, tracking the current positions of the IMPERIAL INVADING FLEET, fills the room. REX takes a HOLOMAP HIGHLIGHTER WAND out of his LEFT POCKET.) We will create Five Main Perimeters, here (circles a large swath of area in yellow, which autofills the area in faded, see-through yellow), here (does the same), here (ditto), here (ditto) and here (makes one final circle) (presses a few buttons on the wand.) The Perimeter circles close in on the invaders.) We will hem them in in a pincer maneuver, harrassing mainly their bulk ships and mostly ignoring the TIES. Our main objective is to, as Ezra said, capture or destroy the Chimera. If more Imps arrive out of Hyperspace, we'll deal with them the same way. They stepped on an anthill and we're Gamorrean fire ants. Our victory is assured.
Off to the side, an aged LASAT with a BOWRIFLE, GARAZEB ORRELIOS, GRINS from EAR TO EAR. He bears GENERAL'S BARS as WELL, and is dressed in a GENERAL'S SUIT. Next to him STANDS HARA SYNDULLA, an AGED yet still BEAUTIFUL TWI'LEK, smiling a WAN SMILE, and at her side is CHOPPER, her faithful droid, who is excited as well.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 4:41:51 GMT -6
SC 82 EXT CLONING FACILITY-WAYLAND-DAYA VERY HEAVILY GUARDED CLONING FACILITY LOOMS in the VIEW of AHSOKA, CHEWBACCA, LANDO and the FOUR DROIDS. CHEWIE whispers in LANDO's EAR. LANDO: (To Chewie) Well, it almost worked before. Ahsoka, do you have any binders in your satchel. Ones that could actually FIT a Wookiee's wrists? AHSOKA: I think I have just the thing. Will a long length of SHOCK ROPE tied around his wrists do, by any chance? LANDO: (Grins) You know, it just might. SC 83 INT WAYLAND-CLONING FACILITY-DAY
Two STORMTROOPERS who are really LANDO and AHSOKA in DISGUISE roughly jostle, CHEWBACCA disguised as their prisoner, and the FOUR DROIDS, spray painted with BLACK MARKINGS except for 3PO, march SINGLE FILE, unnoticed by the IMPERIALS who seem too busy with their own affairs to notice anything unusual.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 4:58:08 GMT -6
SC 84 EXT SPACE The CHIMERA LOOMS in front of the MASSIVE IMPERIAL ARMADA.SC 85 INT CHIMERA-BRIDGE
PALLEON: This will be a day long remembered. What Tarkin and Vader and Kylo Ren only dreamed of is finally coming to fruition. The end of the Rebellion is finally at hand. THRAWN: History is on the move, Captain. Those who cannot keep up will be left behind, to watch from a distance, and those who stand in our way, will not watch at all. The Rebels are likely to set up a number of perimeters around our fleet and attempt a pincer maneuver. In the past, that might have worked. But the Rebel fleet cannot even imagine what I have in store for them. I assure you, Captain, our victory is guaranteed. Foolproof, as they say. There are no loose threads that could unravel us. I've thought of every possible exigency. The Rebellion will be snuffed out for good. And good riddance.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 5:33:10 GMT -6
JORUUS C'BAOTH confidently STRIDES onto the BRIDGE from the TURBOLIFT.
JORUUS: I DEMAND that you give me command of a ship and a crew to command, THRAWN! I must go back to Wayland IMMEDIATELY!
THRAWN: What for?
JORUUS: That is none of your concern.
THRAWN: Fine. I'll humor you. You may have a bulk cruiser with a TIE Special Escort. Go, you have your ship and your crew. I have no more need of you.
C'BAOTH: You shall soon be dead and I shall be the Ruler of this Empire that was always mine by RIGHT!
THRAWN: I doubt that. Go, fly away on your new ship before you start to try my patience.
At either side of THRAWN, his NOGHRI stand guard.
C'BAOTH turns gruffly on his heel and strides off of the BRIDGE back into the TURBOLIFT.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 5:50:20 GMT -6
SC 86 INT CLONING FACILITY-WAYLAND-DAY
The PARTY OF SEVEN STRIDE past TENS OF THOUSANDS of CLONING CYLINDERS. At REGULAR, PLANNED INTERVALS, AHSOKA and LANDO, in their STORMTROOP ARMOR, PLANT TIMER CHARGES in KEY AREAS, unnoticed by all IMPERIALS.
SC 87 INT-WAYLAND-CLONING FACILITY-DAY
A STORMTROOPER on PATROL DUTY, walks down a corridor and notices one of the CHARGES.
STORMTROOPER: Hey! SOUND THE ALARM!
SC 88 INT-WAYLAND-CLONING FACILITY- SECURITY ROOM
An IMPERIAL OFFICER, hearing the ALARMS, checks the SECURITY CAMS for anything SUSPICIOUS. He CLEARLY sees TWO STORMTROOPERS planting CHARGES, sees they are with a SUSPICIOUS WOOKIEE, and PUTS his RADIO to his MOUTH.
OFFICER: Be on the lookout for two fake Stormtroops of irregular height and shape, one appearing to be a female judging from her overstuffed bosom. They are with a Wookiee wearing rope around his wrists, three droids spray-painted black-rather sloppily I might add- and one Golden Protocol Droid. Shoot to kill. Presume them to be armed and extremely dangerous.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 5:56:17 GMT -6
SC 89 EXT-WAYLAND-CLONING FACILITY-DAY
Imperial AT-ST WALKERS and HUNDREDS OF STORMTROOPERS converge on the CLONING FACILITY.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 6:01:07 GMT -6
SC 90 EXT SPACE
The MASSIVE REBEL FLEET EMERGES from CORUSCANT'S UPPER ATMOSPHERE and starts SPREADING OUT ALL OVER to FORM THEIR Perimeters as the TURBOLASERS of the CAPITAL SHIPS fire upon them and the TIE's HARRASS THEM.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 6:23:06 GMT -6
SC 91 INT MOUNTAIN FORTRESS-DAY
Having dispatched all the Imperial Troops and Officers ,(We see piles of dead bodies and DOWNED AT-ST and AT-AT WALKERS) , FOUR JEDI RUSH in to the HIDDEN FORTRESS, SABERS SWINGING, blocking blaster bolts, BEHEADING DARKTROOPERS, SKEWERING OFFICER AND SOLDIER ALIKE, and just GENERALLY WREAKING HAVOC. They come to a LARGE ROOM where there is a LARGE HOVERCHAIR whose BACK FACES THEM. It TURNS around to REVEAL LU'UKE calmly stroking a Lothcat, which he pats on the head, then gently scooches off of his LAP. He STANDS UP, and ROLLS HIS EYES.
LU'UKE: Not a bit surprising that you four working together easily took out hundreds of those low-level lackeys (He practically spits out the term) They are expendable. They can easily be replaced at mere pocket change to my Master. Are you really so stupid to think the four of you can overcome me and my Master if you couldn't even overcome ME not once, not TWICE, but THREE times? You are not only naïve, but positively DUMB to think so.
ROSE: You will die.
LU'UKE: Whatever. (Moves left pinkie. Across the room, a switch activates. The HEAVY CEILING RAPIDLY STARTS to DESCEND UPON the FOUR JEDI.) I'd dispatch the four of you myself, but it would be much too easy. Ahsoka is much more of a challenge.
TOGETHER THE FOUR JEDI FORCE PUSH the CEILING back UP, COUNTERING the HYDRAULICS and REVERSING THEM, twisting the METAL inside, which we hear SCRAPING AGAINST ITSELF and SCREAMINGLY GRATING INSIDE the WALLS.
LU'UKE: Hm. Figured as much. (Ignites sabers and steps forward, shedding his OUTER ROBE.)
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 14:00:23 GMT -6
As an ORIGINAL SCORE plays, LU'UKE and the FOUR JEDI have an even MORE intense DUEL than before. Blade crosses blade crosses blade, and after five minutes of intense FIGHTING, ROSE TICO SUDDENLY does a reverse SPIN in TANDEM with FINN's REVERSE SPIN in the OPPOSITE DIRECTION and LU'UKE is CUT DOWN at the KNEE JOINTS. He GASPS in PAIN, staring in DISBELIEF at his SEVERED LOWER LEGS, then BEN and REY, on EITHER SIDE of HIM, one behind, one in FRONT, PIERCE HIM THRROUGH IN TWO DIRECTIONS AT ONCE in VITAL AREAS. LU'UKE falls over DEAD.THE FOUR JEDI advance.SC 92 INT CLONING FACILITY-WAYLAND-DAYAs AHSOKA PROTECTS LANDO AND CHEWIE, DEFLECTING BLASTER BOLT after BLASTER BOLT back at the ADVANCING STORMTROOPS and OFFICERS, CHEWIE AND LANDO FIRE AWAY AT them with RIFLE AND BOWCASTER, as they CONTINUE PLANTING CHARGES.SC 93 EXT SPACE AROUND CORUSCANT As a HARMONIOUS BLEND of REBEL ALLIANCE FLEET MUSIC from THE BATTLE OF ENDOR in RETURN OF THE JEDI and the RESISTANCE THEME plays, the Perimeters of REBEL ships begin their PINCER MANEUVER, but THEN A MASSIVE ARMADA of SUPER STAR DESTROYERS DECLOAKS AROUND the REBEL POSITIONS, DWARFING ALL their PERIMETER AREAS. The REBEL ships begin to be PICKED OFF ONE BY ONE.SC 94 INT REX'S X-WING-COCKPIT-SPACE
REX: That Chiss Devil! He guessed our strategy! (A look of GRIM DETERMINATION crosses his features) Men, It's a one in a million shot but HALF of our REBEL SHIPS are about to do A MASSIVE HOLDO MENEUVER in FIVE DIRECTIONS on the outlying DESTROYERS--WITH ME IN THE LEAD! (V.O) EZRA: Rex! NO! REX: Sorry, kid, but it's the only way to stop them. Tell my wife....I (sobs heavily and sheds a tear) love her very much. (V.O) EZRA: Rex! No! You can't do this! I won't let you! There's GOT to be another way! REX: Kid, there IS no other way. Love ya, kid! We had a good life together, you and I, and Snips. See ya in the afterlife. Alright Boys, ON MY MARK, 3..... (V.O) EZRA: No...... REX: ....2............. SC 95 EXT SPACE AROUND CORUSCANT Half the REBEL FLEET, from X-WINGS to MON CALAMAR CRUISERS, JUMP into HYPERSPACE in FIVE DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS, TEARING A CRIPPLING GAPING HOLE in the ENTIRE OUTLYING IMPERIAL ARMADA, RENDERING them USELESS. SC 96 INT EZRA'S COCKPIT-SPACEEZRA: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SC 97 INT CLONING FACILITY-WAYLAND-DAY
In a relatively SAFE AREA, AHSOKA TANO's RIGHT HAND GOES TO HER TEMPLE as she PAUSES in SHOCK and DISBELIEF.
AHSOKA: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! My husband! My dear husband! My lover! My best friend! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
She goes down to her knees and weeps and weeps as LANDO and CHEWIE continue to FIRE all around her. She scratches aimlessly at the floor, and BOWS HER HEAD, and CLOSES HER EYES.
AHSOKA: My husband, my dear, dear husband! (She continues to weep and to mourn.) Then, with a look of GRIM DETERMINATION and RESOLVE, she gets up and CONTINUES the BATTLE.SC 98 INT CHIMERA-BRIDGEGRAND ADMIRAL THRAWN stares in SHOCK and DISBELIEF AT the TACTICAL DISPLAY BEFORE him which SHOWS the REMAINING REBELS REGROUPING and REFORMING THEIR PERIMETERS, and THE PINCER MANEUVER WORKING just as REX HAD PLANNED. The IMPERIAL FLEET is BEING DECIMATED and DISMANTLED. PALLEON watches in DISBELIEF as a POOL OF BLOOD FORMS AT HIS HEART, STAINING HIS CRISP WHITE UNIFORM. THE NOGHRI BESIDE HIM HAD STABBED HIM THROUGH FROM BEHIND.THRAWN: But notice how artfully it was all done. GRAND ADMIRAL THRAWN KEELS OVER DEAD WITH A LOUD GROAN and FALLS TO THE FLOOR, EYES WIDE OPEN IN TERROR. JUST THEN EXPLOSIONS ERUPT ALL AROUND THRAWN'S DEAD BODY AND CAPTAIN PALLEON is INCINERATED WHERE HE STANDS. SC 99 EXT SPACE The CHIMERA goes down in flames toward CORUSCANT'S UPPER ATMOSPHERE.SC 100 INT CORUSCANT-REBEL BASE-DAYAs HUNDREDS of RESERVE OFFICERS, PILOTS and TROOPS monitor the TACTICAL DISPLAY, A SPONTANIOUS CHEER ERUPTS THROUGH THE CROWD.SC 101 EXT CLONING FACILITY-WAYLAND AS WALKERS fire on AHSOKA and CREW, she begins to lop their LEGS OFF with SUPERNATURAL STRENGTH and RENEWED DETERMINATION, THEN SHE SLICES THROUGH THEIR THICK METAL HIDES, ONCE BROUGHT DOWN, throws charges in, and they EXPLODE.
LANDO and Ahsoka have SHED their ARMOR.EVERY WALKER, TROOP and OFFICER now dispatched by LANDO, CHEWIE and AHSOKA, AHSOKA rushes to the aid of ROSE, BEN, REY and FINN, telling LANDO and CHEWIE to stay WITHOUT the MOUNTAIN FORTRESS and KEEP GUARD.SC 102 INT HIDDEN FORTRESS-WAYLAND-DAYThe FOUR JEDI come face to face with DARK JEDI MASTER JORUUS C'BAOTH, sitting upon a DAIS overlooking a tactical display of the BATTLE OVER CORUSCANT.
C'BAOTH: Rey Palpatine! Kylo Ren! FN-2187 of the First Order! Rose Tico! I have been waiting for you. All of you. Come witness the working of my ultimate design! Thrawn is DEAD! HA! LU'UKE has been vanquished by you four. I expected no less. FN-2187 shall make an excellent replacement for him. I shall school him in the TRUE NATURE of the Force. After I kill the rest of you, or get him to do it for me. He has become powerful! I can sense, can FEEL his anger, his FEAR, his AGGRESSION! Come here, my boy! FINN: I don't think so! You are so dead! C'BAOTH: Oh, really? C'BAOTH releases a FULL VOLLEY of FORCE LIGHTING which ENGULFS the FOUR JEDI as they WRITHE ON the FLOOR in AGONY.C'BAOTH: I am the ruler of the Galactic Empire now! The Sith Mantle has fallen upon MY SHOULDERS! I WILL NOT be DENIED!
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Jul 16, 2021 14:30:06 GMT -6
JUST THEN AHSOKA TANO steps in to the THRONE ROOM.
AHSOKA: At an end, your reign is, and not short enough it was.
THE VOLLEY of LIGHTNING CEASES.
C'BAOTH: Ahsoka Tano. I was not expecting such an one as yourself. How pleasant of you to join us.
SUDDENLY C'BAOTH SENDS an EVEN more DEADLY VOLLEY OF LIGHTNING AT AHSOKA, but she raises up her LEFT PALM and COUNTERS the VOLLEY with a PURE LIGHT BLUE ENERGY BEAM CHANNELED THROUGH HER CRYSTALLINE PROSTHESIS, and the LIGHTING AND BEAM BOTH go BACK and HIT HIM-HARD, KNOCKING him OFF HIS THRONE. He leaps to his feet and takes out and ignites his PURE CRIMSON BLADE, and RUSHES at AHSOKA with such SPEED AND FURY that it is all she can do for AHSOKA to keep her feet in the BATTLE. JORUUS' constant spins, twists, THRUSTS, REVERSE THRUSTS, REVERSE SPINS and kicks to AHSOKA'S FACE, which are so hard SHE REELS FROM THEM, keep her constantly ON HER TOES and CONTINUALLY on her GUARD.
Then, WITH RENEWED DETERMINATION, TANO launces an INTENSE VOLLEY of HER OWN SABER ATTACKS, EMPLOYING EVERY KNOWN JEDI SWORDFIGHTING STYLE AND STANCE, and SOME SHE JUST INVENTS ON THE SPUR OF THE MOMENT OUT of NECCESSITY as she DUEL WIELDS.
IT IS A STALEMATE. BOTH JEDI back AWAY from EACH OTHER.
Then AHSOKA sends a HEALING WAVE that HITS all FOUR INCAPACITATED JEDI, REVIVING them FULLY.
JORUUS ATTACKS THE GROUP OF FIVE, BUT he IS NO MATCH FOR THEIR COMBINED STRENTH AND SKILL. AHSOKA LANDS the KILLING BLOW, SLICING JORUUS C'BAOTH IN HALF RIGHT DOWN THE MIDDLE. BOTH HALVES OF JORUUS C'BAOTH fall outwardly to the left and to the RIGHT, SPLITTING HIM WIDE OPEN, HIS GORE SPILING OUT ONTO the THRONEROOM FLOOR.
SC 103 EXT CLONING FACILITY-WAYLAND-DAY
The CLONING FACILITY EXPLODES in a HUGE EPIC EXPLOSION.
SC 104 INT CORUSCANT-REBEL HALL-DAY
The AWARDS CEREMONY ASSEMBLY music from A NEW HOPE plays as REY puts medals around the necks of first, CHEWBACCA, THEN AHSOKA, BEN SOLO-SKYWALKER, C-3PO, LANDO CALLIRISSEAN, FINN REDEEMED, POE DAMERON, ROSE TICO, and FINALLY ONTO AN HONORED GUEST FROM AFAR, PRINCESS CHRODORA.
FINN is wearing a black, shiny clip on PADAWAN BRAID.
The MUSIC takes on a SOLEMN TONE as there is a MOMENT OF SILENCE to MARK the PASSING of TANO'S HUBSAND, COMMANDER REX. TANO WEEPS VISIBLY. THEN THE AUDIENCE CHEERS and APPLAUDS as the CHANT FREEDOM! FREEDOM! FREEDOM! FREEDOM! STARTS SPONTANEOUSLY. THERE are MANY WHISTLES, CHEERS and MUCH APPLAUDING. The Galaxy Rests......for now.
IRIS OUT
END CREDITS
THE END
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Feb 22, 2022 19:53:09 GMT -6
Completed with Numbering Scenes at 7:52 PM 2/22/2022 AD/CE-BLSKV
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Feb 22, 2022 20:09:50 GMT -6
Note to Dave Filoni: If you use this Script (I plan to produce SW 11 then 10 by May of this year. Right now I need to Edit Rose Tico and her and Finn's children into the rest of my Scripts after Episode 12) I do not want you to change any of my Dialogue, scenes or ideas or Original Character names (whether personified objects such as the Luck of The Draw or OC's), but you may add things. Remember this script is my intellectual property, and I want you to remember that within a few or several years I do plan on founding CAVE-I. I have provided on Theory Guy's discussion board a narrative, that was endorsed by a fan, to fill a lot of the 30 year gap between Mando and Episode 7 that he said was very well thought out, part of which was George Lucas' idea, partly mine, and which many people know about. This narrative perfectly connects the Mandalorian and BOBF with Episodes 7-9 with plenty of leeway for doing your own things. For now I also propose or pitch to you and Lucasfilm the following idea: A Jedi/Sith War cartoon predating the High Republic in 2-D, in the same style (stylistically the same) as Tartovsky's 2003 Clone Wars series( which I propose or pitch should immediately with the Holiday Special be made canon, for really they do not conflict, except for minor things of the type that already exist in existing Canon anyway). I don't ask for any remuneration except that you give me screenplay writing and idea credit and you don't change my scripts by taking anything that is in them from them. Yours in good faith, Brent Sohlden, my current legal name.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Feb 22, 2022 20:57:07 GMT -6
Bridging the 30 year gap....ideas for canon
The following I share as ideas which it is my hope LFL Execs seriously consider for canon, and could be considered an AU fanfic if not used: The death of Luke's snowspeeder gunner Dak led to his discouragement, echoed in SW Episode 8, Santa. Before the Battle of Hoth, Dak had said, Right now i feel like I could take on the whole Empire myself, and Luke replied, I know what you mean....then tons of tragic things happened to Luke, losing his nephew to the Dark Side, his temple, his academy, his students, daughter Jane, Son Jace to the Dark Side and then to Ahsoka's blade, son Anakin off into exile secretly to take the Barish Oath, and also Luke losing his wife Mara to Kylo Ben's wrath, losing his nephew Dennis by Ben accidentally impaling him with a saber, he exiled himself on Achch-To and cut himself off from the Force, knowing the Jedi Order would die with him, and then, in the Last Jedi, Luke, discouraged, told Rey, do you think I can just face down the Entire First Order with a lightsaber, recalling the words of his snowspeeder gunner so many years ago on Hoth.
The plot is perhaps during Mando, Gideon is Qi'ra's apprentice, as Qi'ra is the Maul Clone's. The Maul clone steps in and turns Jace Skywalker to be Lord Cadeus, who attempts to sacrifice young Anakin Skywalker to the god of the dark side, rescued by Ahsoka Tano, who loses her left hand in the duel, in which she defeats Cadeus. She replaces her left hand by a light blue crystalline beautiful hand she constructs herself. Maul Clone's first apprentice is a sexy Twi'lek female Sith Lord named Darth Talon whom Jane Skywalker slays while Ben Solo Luke's nephew is a preteen. The Maul Clone's soldiers give rise to a resurrected Imperial remnant, explaining the Zabrok tribal markings on First Order stormtrooper helmets. Eventually Snoke trains an apprentice, then when he is defeated, he seduces Ben Solo. The Maul Clone is defeated by Luke. Maul Clone's soldiers and remnants combine with Snoke's command of the Imperial remnants giving rise to the First Order. Grogu is secreted away in exile to fight another day. After Episode 9, episodes 10-12 are the Thrawn Trilogy where Rey is Lady Palpatine.
Yoda's secret wife was Yaddle and he always knew about Anakin/Padme. Their legitimate child was Grogu.
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Comment: Emperor's Wrath 7 minutes: This is a very well-thought out narrative. I think this actually might work with the ST and Disney should definitely consider using it. Great work.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Feb 22, 2022 21:02:44 GMT -6
11:39 AM
There is a Palpatine cloning project on another part of Kamino.
[11:39 AM]
This is revealed later
Raz — Today at 11:40 AM
In what media?
Brent"study36"FinalWarning"KoivV — Today at 11:40 AM
Kamino is too big a planet for an entire planet of cloners to have only one major facility on it
[11:41 AM]
Star Wars Episodes 13-15.
Rey and Ben's force energy (the Dyad) and harvested midichlorians by Rasa Lem over a number of years helps Palpatine implement his master plan
[11:41 AM]
Episode 9 was a setup for Episode 13
[11:42 AM]
The Force Ghost of Luke skywalker helps the Jedi and the new Republic foil Palpatine's master plan until the Vong invade
What did you think of the Humorous versions?
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Feb 22, 2022 21:04:51 GMT -6
Rotta's still a child mentally by BOBF so we won't see him till Ma Buki: Heir Apparent in which after a fair contest Boba yields his rights to the Huttese Empire to it's heir Rotta the Hutt.
[11:51 AM]
I will try to make it a YT TV series I could cross-platform it to Hulu, Netflix and YT maybe
[11:53 AM]
Sheev will be the long-awaited sequel to The Acolyte and will include parts of Episode I and II at the end of the series and in the series finale he executes Order 66
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Feb 23, 2022 2:29:10 GMT -6
In Star Wars, the Emporer is using the Dark Side of an entity that is always working against him, and the Jedi are using the Light Side of an entity that is always working for them.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Feb 23, 2022 2:33:05 GMT -6
Brent: Hey,are they actually going to crossover LOTR with SW Ahsoka?
SkywalkersAcademy — Today at 4:24 PM
I hope you find a way, Brent
Brent"study36"FinalWarning"KoivV — Today at 4:24 PM
Might as well throw in Terminator, Star Trek and Marvel too
SkywalkersAcademy — Today at 4:24 PM
Not really a crossover…
Brent"study36"FinalWarning"KoivV — Today at 4:24 PM
Make a big uncompatable mess
SkywalkersAcademy — Today at 4:24 PM
Parallels???
Brent"study36"FinalWarning"KoivV — Today at 4:25 PM
There needs to be boundary lines that should be held sancrosanct and uncrossable in fictions
SkywalkersAcademy — Today at 4:26 PM
Parallels don’t really cross lines, per se.
Brent"study36"FinalWarning"KoivV — Today at 4:27 PM
I think its ok for noncanonical crossovers, don't get me wrong but not for canon
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Even No War Home was a stretch
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If they tried pulling a No Way Home with Star Wars it would be too unrealistic for my tastes
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You could say, take for example, that the middle ages of, say, Tython were the plot of LOTR with the Simalirion beiong their bible and the sacred flame being the Force, but then you have the month of October to deal with which is mentioned in Fellowship of the Ring
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It just wouldn't work
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Well, it was one of our gregorian months anyhow
Star Wars Santa:
@brent"study36"FinalWarning"KoivV
Jon & Dave have been playing with some LOTR themes.
- Grogu & the Beskar Shirt is very similar to Hobbits & Mithril armor.
- The battle in TBOBF Ep#7 has very similar vibes to LOTR Helms Deep.
- Musical themes between the two can be heard.
- Some cinematic parallels between scenes in both.
- Space Wizards / Wizards (edited)
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The working title for Ahsoka is borrowed from LOTR.
[5:00 PM]
And then there's this:
(A cartoon of Ahsoka the White talking with Gandalf the White)
Brent"study36"FinalWarning"KoivV — Today at 11:44 PM
Oh, NOW I know what you mean. That's just fine.
[11:46 PM]
There are parralels between Return of the Jedi and Return of the King: Theoden says You already have when Eowyn says I've got to save you and Theoden dies. Eowyn is Theoden's daughter
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Feb 23, 2022 2:36:57 GMT -6
Faith is all the positive energy in existence
[4:42 PM]
Doubt is the negative energy
[4:42 PM]
Faith is assurance of what is hoped for, and evidence of what is not seen
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What is unseen lasts forever and what is seen is only temporary
[4:44 PM]
Because of particle physics we know that energy can be converted to mass which can be converted back to energy
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So what is invisible can be visible to ones who can see it
[4:44 PM]
Think on those things
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Feb 23, 2022 4:22:48 GMT -6
There's going to have to be the Grysk AND the Vong. The Grysk are from the Unknown regions but the Vong are from another Galaxy..
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Feb 23, 2022 4:24:34 GMT -6
The Ben Solo Fix
There is a rather easy way to bring Ben Solo back: After the scene where Rey and Ben Kiss, just cut straight to the scene after he was supposedly supposed to die. Then add a scene where Rey is introducing Ben to the Resistance as a changed man, then show the end celebrations, editing Ben Solo into the picture somewhere.
DF48056 commented:
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This is what I want to see in post-ROS sequels; Ben Solo's return.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on Feb 24, 2022 21:13:00 GMT -6
2-24-2022 7:42 PM CDT My shower was awesome. I had a long nap afterwards. I think I'll see about writing Rose Tico and her and Finn's children into Star Wars 13-15 tonight after I take my pills and Centrum Men's multivitamin.
I'll probably eat a good supper, but what? I'll figure something out, just don't want to spend money on it.
Colt didn't visit today.
I had a can of sea salt and Sliced Potatoes for supper. Very yummy!
Now I will work on Episode 13. Still need to get those ages of Luke and Sarah right. Star Wars 10-12 would have to take place exactly 6 years before Episode 13.
8:56 PM CDT Where God's will is, there is a way. And I found the way to get Luke and Sarah the correct ages, but now I have to write Rose and Finn's children into Star Wars Episodes 10-12, NOT just 13-17.
9:05 PM Ok, now I've got it established that Rose and Finn had been dating off and on while Finn was busy fighting Imperial Remnants and so was Rose for ten years and for nine years Ben had been serving out a prison term. So Rose and Finn don't marry til at least the end of Episode 11.
9:07 PM Ok, now that I have the foundations laid so things make much more sense, I can easily write Rose and her offspring's characters into Star Wars Episodes 13-15, which I'll start possibly tomorrow.
10:12 PM I am now laboring in preparing TPM HV for posting to YouTube, or what we have of it so far. I am also posting the first two thirds of AOTC HV tonight.
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Post by BrentKoivopolo888 on May 2, 2022 19:17:29 GMT -6
05/02/2022 AD 8:18 PM Changed Name of Princess to match Canon.
Changed 'Speakwook' to ' Shyriiwook'.
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